Our boys have completed their writing practice 8 in class today. For homework today, kindly practise describing the picture below. I'll be revising picture description component to prepare our boys for their oral examination next week.
A possible picture description:
This picture depicts a scene at a hospital ward. There are two patients in the ward. The patient nearer to the windows is looking very miserable as his leg is in a cast. In my opinion, he must be feeling quite upset because his injury is preventing him from being mobile. With his condition, I believe he must recuperate for quite a long period. The man standing next to this patient seems to be in a joyful mood. I believe from his candid gestures and facial expression, he must be trying very hard to brighten the patient's foul mood. That is truly a commendable effort. However, he must be careful not to be over zealous as he may disturb the other patient in the ward. In contrast, the other elderly patient seems to be more at ease. Although it must be uncomfortable to have a drip on his arm, he seems glad to be in good company. The elderly lady sitting beside him is probably his wife. She is feeding the patient some food. I believe this thoughtful gesture must have helped the patient feel happier. There is a young girl holding a teddy bear at the foot of the patient's bed. She is probably the patient's grandchild. It is always advisable for the family to show care and concern for the sick. At the bottom of the picture, I can see two boys running. They must be playing a game of catching and seem oblivious to the people in the ward. In my opinion, I think it is very dangerous to indulge in such childish games in public places. The boys might injure themselves or cause serious harm to other patients. I believe parents of children should be vigilant and ensure that their children are not up to any sort of mischief in public places, especially the hospital. In conclusion, I feel it is indeed unfortunate for a person to have to stay in a hospital. Hopefully, the two patients in the picture will be discharged soon.
Picture taken from "A guide to English Oral Skills" Raffles publications
Sample introduction taught in class today
Starting a story with the climax (focusing on emotions of the protagonist)
A wave of panic hit Tom. The branch that was supporting him seemed to sag. With clammy hands, Tom tightened his grip on the branch. Alas, Tom's weight proved too much for the poor branch.
"Ah!" he yelled as he plunged into the lake. The sheer coldness of the water sent shock waves through his body. Gasping for breath, Tom struggled in the cold water.
"Help! Help!" cried Tom, thrashing wildly in the water. Fortunately for him, his friends were nearby. They ran as fast as their legs could carry them towards the half-submerged Tom. Tom was in dire need of help. He was losing energy fast! His feeble attempt to stay afloat could not hold on forever. Fear overcame Tom as he took a huge gulp of the murky lake water. It seemed only moments ago where he was on safe grounds, surrounded by all his friends … …
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